Image 1: Not enough fill light at all. Turn on exposure settings and tweak for indoor lighitng. Add a portal light to enhance the final gathering and possibly add a FG bounce. DO NOT USE THE DEFAULT MAX A&D WOOD TEXTURE. Feed in your own wood texture and adjust the spec and bump. The entrance upstairs should be framed with wood molding. Add edge loops or inset to bevel the stairs.
Image 2: Also not enough fill light. Ditto with the portal light, default wood texture and FG bounce. Fix the spec on the wall and rough up the carpet a little bit. Consider adding more decor and distressing the wood on the ladder more.
Image 3: The cliff looks a lot better but you can still clearly see that hard edge between the grass and cliff side. Try to break it up more. Good job with the platforms but please make them more used, missing planks, or more irregular. The texturing on side structure windows is not finished. Please add more grass and break it up more with the mix and composite materials. Add small clumps of grass and rocks. Especially at the base of the structures and trees. Repost with the background image intact. Use jpg not png.
Image 1:
ReplyDeleteNot enough fill light at all. Turn on exposure settings and tweak for indoor lighitng. Add a portal light to enhance the final gathering and possibly add a FG bounce. DO NOT USE THE DEFAULT MAX A&D WOOD TEXTURE. Feed in your own wood texture and adjust the spec and bump.
The entrance upstairs should be framed with wood molding. Add edge loops or inset to bevel the stairs.
Image 2:
Also not enough fill light. Ditto with the portal light, default wood texture and FG bounce. Fix the spec on the wall and rough up the carpet a little bit. Consider adding more decor and distressing the wood on the ladder more.
Image 3:
The cliff looks a lot better but you can still clearly see that hard edge between the grass and cliff side. Try to break it up more. Good job with the platforms but please make them more used, missing planks, or more irregular. The texturing on side structure windows is not finished. Please add more grass and break it up more with the mix and composite materials. Add small clumps of grass and rocks. Especially at the base of the structures and trees. Repost with the background image intact. Use jpg not png.